WRITING: GIVING YOUR OPINION

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1. Mobile phones wich were created for bussiness use were more big.

2. By this time the next month I will being study for my exam's.

3. The writer say that this monuments are well preserve.

4. How are they look like? They are very attractives.

5. How much time he have lived in Paris?

6. If the technology hadn't appear, many works wouldn't changed.

7. My brother work in an industry. His job is really bored.

8. This works are very specialised. The company only contract people with a computers career.

9. The first year at the university I recommend to live in a residence.

10. From my opinion is a good idea study abroad one year, if you have the posibility.

11. She works as a teacher for ten years.

12. We are good friends since we did primary education.

13. You think live in big cities can be stressful? I think yes. I am agree with this oppinion.

14. In a digital world is more easy to look for a job.

15. My friend work in the police during ten years.

16. The woman who his daughter was contract as a manager is my teacher for two years.

17. If you are unemploy you should to tell your family and friends.

18. Work in the same place for a long time can make you feeling boring and insatisfied.

19. In conclussion, live in the country is hard because is more good to live near to a big hospital. 

20. I don't like change constantly. I prefer remain in the same work always.

21. You must to do an efort. You should to loose esperance never.

22. In the one hand I think that have the same job for a long time give you secure an experience.

23. If my boss has been nicer, I would had continue working for that business.

25. A lot of efort is require to finish a university career. 

26. We think is necesary to repas irregular verbs before the exam. 

27. Are you happy with your first evaluation notes? No, is posible improve they. 

28. Did you passed all your asignatures? No, I couldn't passed Maths because is very dificult. 

29. Learn is always funny because this form you never bored. 

30. If teachers would have less students per class, teach would be more effective. 

KEY

1. Mobile phones which were created for business use were bigger.

2. By this time next month I will be studying for my exams.

3. The writer says that these monuments are well preserved.

4. What do they look like? They are very attractive.

5. How long has he lived in Paris?/How long has he been living in Paris?

6. If technology hadn't appeared, many jobs/positions wouldn't have changed.

7. My brother works in a factory. His job is really boring.

8. These jobs/positions are very specialised. The company only hires people with a computers degree.

9. The first year at university I recommend living in a residence.

10. In my opinion it is a good idea to study abroad for one year, if you have the possibility.

11. She has worked / has been working as a teacher for ten years.

12. We have been good friends since we did primary education.

13. Do you think living in big cities can be stressful? I think so. I agree with this opinion.

14. In a digital world it is easier to look for a job.

15. My friend has worked in the police for ten years.

16. The woman whose daughter was hired as a manager has been my teacher for two years.

17. If you are unemployed, you should tell your family and friends.

18. Working in the same place for a long time can make you feel bored and disatisfied.

19. In conclusion, living in the country is hard because it is better to live near a big hospital. 

20. I don't like changing constantly. I prefer remaining in the same position always./ I always prefer…/ I prefer always…

21. You must make an effort. You should never lose hope.

22. On the one hand I think that having the same job for a long time gives you security and experience.

23. If my boss had been nicer, I would have continued working for that company.

25. A lot of effort is required to finish a university degree. 

26. We think it is necessary to revise irregular verbs before the exam. 

27. Are you happy with your first term marks? No, it is possible to improve them. 

28. Did you pass all your subjects? No, I couldn't pass Maths because it is very difficult. 

29. Learning is always fun because in this way / doing this  you never feel bored. / you will never feel bored.

30. If teachers had/could have  less students per class, teaching would be more effective.