Topic: Write a narrative about an accident you suffered
(Perfect, Past tenses + Third Conditional in the conclusion)
Student Version (Low Mark – 3/10).
The last summer
I
have an accident when I
went to the park with my bike. It was a rainy day. I wanted to ride my bike because I
finished my exams and I was feeling very happy. I
didn’t wear the
helmet because I was in a hurry and I thought nothing bad
can happen. When
I arrived near the park, a dog
run in front of me and I
try to
stop but I couldn’t. I
falled down very hard and
hurted my leg.
Some people
was looking at me and a woman
which was with her baby
help me to stand up. I was very
embarrased and my leg was
bleding
a bit. At home, my mother was very angry because I
didn’t call her. If I
had listened to her and
wore the helmet, I wouldn’t
had hurted
myself. I
learn a lesson that day about
be more careful and
always
use protection when I ride.
1.-Mark the paragraphs
2.-Correct the grammar mistakes
3.-Include some connectors: suddenly, (un)fortunately, at first, during, finally, although, however.
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